Falling

[franceslievens]

White fluff came falling from the air like someone shaking out her duvet. The little dots tried to compete with the sun, attacked the pavement. "Lie still, lie still," they whispered: "Don't move and you might just make it." But the snow flakes melted. Two or three seconds they had a short lived fluffy life and then they dissolved to water again.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I really like the word fluffy, like in Pink Fluffy Dinosaurs (http://www.lyricsfreak.com/h/hooverphonic/65981.html).

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[frances-lievens.livejournal.com]

Me too. Ooh, it's snowing a lot now and it stays on the roof of the garage!